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Awesome work! I really liked that all the art were drawn and created by you, and it fits the vibe of the game. I had fun playing this :)

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Congrats! My wife loves all things detectives so I let her play it and she says we need more detective games like this! Honestly great job and congrats on releasing your first game! I'll be releasing my very first full game in a day or two for this jam, so I know firsthand what its like. I'm pretty nervous haha

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I'm glad you took the courage and posted it! I love VNs so I'm glad you made a VN for this game jam. I saw you were nervous about reactions in the Level Up Circle server, but I enjoyed this game and I encourage you to keep making more games. 

I loved that you tested the player's attention by asking questions about the investigation so I would not just click through everything but actually focus on the evidence. I didn't encounter any bugs and played through it all. Such a fun game!

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Amazing work!! I really enjoyed the journey you made, I will always check my whiskey for snakes!

Loved the story, the way you used the temperature (coolant / snake) If I could give some feedback:

After leaving the victims house after looking at the clues for the first time, the (move) button was a little hidden (nothing broken) I loved the putting the pieces together feel, check all the clues, being the Rookie Razor, helping out HUDD, Ace and Tak. I like the elephant painting too :D

The names of the players (suspects) when you are choosing who done it would be helpful. This is awesome! Keep up the good work!

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HUDD was basically failing as agency until Razor showed up :sunglasses: